Improvements

We have done a rough cut and obtained some feedback from others of improvements we could make to our film opening.

>The first improvement we could do is introduce a purpose and a hook to the opening so the audience will want to continue watching.
>We could use a variety of different shot lengths, and shorten the film opening to decrease the probability of boredom.
>We need to set the scene properly using establishing shots, and introduce main characters better using close ups.
>We need to include in our final project some film titles and music to create suspense and fill gaps between shots.